Rough Cut Feedback

On Friday 3/02/2012 I had uploaded the footage that I had onto the MAC computer and inserted all footage using Final Cut Pro this is the program in which I will be using to edit my music video. I also showed my class what I edited so far, the feedback was mostly positive however they mentioned that I had to film more shots as it was a little to short.

Feedback I received was:

• Range Of shots I used was very good
• The first 30-40 seconds of my footage looked really good but I needed more
• Needs to be abit more clear